Hey everyone welcome back for the next few weeks i will be doing the summer learning journey and I will be posting all the activity's I do. Today Is Week 1 Day one and this activity is The first activity. I hope you enjoy these blog posts and let me know if I could do anything better. Thank you, Have a good Day, Good-Bye
Kia Ora Nici,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a great comment, I’m desperate to know what is so weird about the teeth. You’ve really left your audience on a cliffhanger which is an amazing writing technique to get them coming back to your blog for more! Well done! I also like how your captions fit the facial expressions of the characters!
What made you think of the story you’ve written? Are you going to make a follow up story?
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Shannon Thank you for commenting on this activity.
DeleteThe weird thing about the teeth is that they were the other mans teeth and they felt weird in the other mans mouth because they didn't fit. When ever I write a story or do something like that I always like to leave others on a cliff hanger.
When I was writing the story I remembered that I did something similar back in primary school so I decided to think of it like It was back in primary school but made it sound better. I could possibly make a follow up story but I would have to get some ideas about it.
I am looking forward to all the activity's because every year that i've done it I have enjoyed every activity.
Whats your favorite part about being apart of the summer Learning Journey?
Have a Wonderful Night
Nici
Kia ora again Nici,
DeleteThank you for your response!
That makes sense! I also love cliffhangers. What do you think is the greatest cliffhanger of all time? My favourites are usually when the bad guy comes back real suddenly!
What would you include in your follow-up comic?
I really enjoy commenting on people’s blog posts. Everyone is so imaginative, and you see some truly astounding blog posts! I have so many favourites, it’s crazy!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Again Shannon
DeleteThank your for responding again.
I'm not really sure what the greatest cliff hanger is but your favorite sounds really good.
I think in the follow up comic I would include the other man telling the guy that lost his teeth in the first place that they were his teeth and then the guy that lost his teeth has to go get new ones.
Thank you for replying to my comment
Have a wonderful day
Nici
Kia Ora Nici,
DeleteThat sounds like a fair follow up story! Because you’ve written such a great comment, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Have a wonderful day!
Shannon
Hi Shannon
DeleteI would Probably write it about something to do with harry potter as I am becoming a big harry potter fan.
Have a amazing day
Nici
Hi Nici,
DeleteI love Harry Potter. My favourite characters are Fred, George, and Charlie Weasley. Who are your favourite characters?
My favourite book is the Prisoner of Azkaban. Which one is your favourite?
Have a great day!
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Shannon
DeleteMy favorite characters are fred and George weasley and draco malfoy.
I don't have a favorite book because im only just starting to read them so I will have to give that a proper answer after I've read them all.
Have a great day
Nici