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Showing posts with label Recount. Show all posts

Friday, 11 August 2017

Coconut Raisin Bliss Balls

For the last few week we have been writing about our Coconut Raisin Bliss balls. First we had to wash our hands. Next we had to watch our reading teacher put all the ingredients in the blender, she did that two times. Then we got to get some and we go a chose on what we wanted to put the chooses were coconut or chocolate powder I got both on two different sides. After That  we had to smell it. Then we got to taste it It was very YUMMY for me but for some other kids it was NOT nice they thought it would have chocolate on it and it didn't.   


WALT - to describe using adjectives and similes.


Coconut Raisin Bliss Balls


The bliss balls looked like dirt. They were like rotten walnuts. When they had the coconut on it looked like rocks were on it. It even looked like a mud ball.


They smelt like coffee. They also smelt like chocolate powder. They were very sweet when I smelt them. They were very coco-nutty .

They tasted strong and delicious. Also all chocolate like because mine have chocolate powder on it.

I heard the blender going rough and VERY noisy. It sounded like our caregiver Mr Smith and his lawnmower.

When I got told that we were tasting something I got excited, joyful but also a little worried. When I tasted the Bliss Balls They were Chewy, Soft, Light and very Messy.

                                               I enjoyed it very much



Tuesday, 1 August 2017

My Holiday Recount

WALT -  We are learning to write a recount using a hook in the Orientation and elaboration of 1 idea.

In Writing we are learning to elaborate  on our ideas and use a hook at the start of our writing. We wrote a recount about our holidays. My hook is Aggggghhhhh that`ts all the people heard from me at Wycolya Park. I have elaborated on my sequence of events I used wow words to elaborate on ideas.




My Hoilday Recount
Aggggghhhhh that’s all the people heard from me at Wycolya Park.In the holidays  Me,  Mum, Zane and Rocky and Tyson went to  Wycola Park. We went just to have some fun together.


First of all we went on the slide. We were acting  like the boss of the park. The way we were acting like the boss of the park is  we were  pretending to boss everyone around. Then we went down again and hit our head on the bark. I went head first because my brother pushed me down. We made a humiliation of ourself.
Next we wanted to go on the monkey bars. We swung like a monkey. We sat on them. We looked like a monkey. I could not reach the bars.
Then we went on the swings. Me and Zane jumped off the swing. We both went flying off the swing when we jumped off. I landed on my back with the stitch it was super painful.
After that we went to the flying fox. We  went zooming in the air. We waited for our turn. We had a blast.



It was a fantastic holiday and I would love to go back again.