I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey everyone welcome back today I was doing the winter Learning Journey. The Activity I chose was activity 6 which is where you tell people what are somethings that you could do in a christchurch, I hope you enjoy Have a wonderful day, Good-Bye
Kia ora Nici It's Maddison how are you? I see your doing the winter learning journey i am also doing it and i see you have done activity 6, i have been golfing and its actually pretty fun and Margret Mahy is fun and its free those are some good places to go in the holidays when you have nothing to do. something you could do next time is write a bigger caption about it but other then that its amazing.
Hello Nici I found your post very detailed with your description on all the different places by including the price and what you can do there. I also like your choice of activity's you chose you have a good selection and a good difference between the things you chose. One thing I think you could do better would be improving your caption but telling a bit more about what you had to do but otherwise I like it.
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Kia ora Nici
ReplyDeleteIt's Maddison how are you? I see your doing the winter learning journey i am also doing it and i see you have done activity 6, i have been golfing and its actually pretty fun and Margret Mahy is fun and its free those are some good places to go in the holidays when you have nothing to do. something you could do next time is write a bigger caption about it but other then that its amazing.
From Maddison
Hello Nici
ReplyDeleteI found your post very detailed with your description on all the different places by including the price and what you can do there. I also like your choice of activity's you chose you have a good selection and a good difference between the things you chose. One thing I think you could do better would be improving your caption but telling a bit more about what you had to do but otherwise I like it.