I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For art we were making tree art with the seasons around the tree. The first thing we did was see a pitcher and then try to copy it and put the seasons around it. Here It Is I Hope you like it.
I have some advise on how you can improve your blurb next time you should spell check not to be rude but picture is spelt like that sorry if that rude i don't mean to be. I really love how you guys did scratching out. Did you enjoy it? If so why, I can't wait to your response
Hi Connie Thanks for you comment. Thank you for telling me how to spell picture, but you don't need to say "sorry if that rude i don't mean to be" because it doesn't need to go into the comment and since you did say that it doesn't make sense when you said "if that rude" you could have said "if that is rude"
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hey Nici
ReplyDeleteI have some advise on how you can improve your blurb next time you should spell check not to be rude but picture is spelt like that sorry if that rude i don't mean to be. I really love how you guys did scratching out. Did you enjoy it? If so why, I can't wait to your response
Sincerely Connie
Hi Connie
DeleteThanks for you comment. Thank you for telling me how to spell picture, but you don't need to say "sorry if that rude i don't mean to be" because it doesn't need to go into the comment and since you did say that it doesn't make sense when you said "if that rude" you could have said "if that is rude"
Again Thanks for you comment
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