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Monday 2 July 2018

Feeling Poems

This Week For Writing we have been writing feeling poems. My First Feeling was Energetically Then Our Principal gave us a challenge, and I chose to take it. So I had to do the opposite feeling to Energetically so it was lazy.
Energetically



Energetically makes the children at the beach really hypo,
Then the kids will fall asleep.


Energetically looks like the adults are tired,
Because of all the hypo children.


Energetically sounds like kids laughing to jokes,
As Their friends tell them jokes.


Energetically tastes like the laughter burning my though,
As laugh to hard.


Energetically feels like friends grabbing your shoulder to stay balanced,
Before they fall over .


Energetically smells like happiness,
As we all laugh to much.


Laziness
Lazy Is the feeling you are if you are just laying in bed,
Doing nothing.
 
Lazy looks like laying around not doing a single thing,
While everyone else does it for you.


Lazy sounds like footsteps,
From of people running to get the thing’s you want.


Lazy Feels like everyone doing something,
Except yourself.


Lazy Tastes like freeness,

Because your not doing what everyone else is doing for you.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Nici i really like your work and the way how you did it BYE!!!

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