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Friday 25 May 2018

Niciś World

This Week For Writing We had to write a narrative About something.  I Choose My Character to be me And My Setting To Be In 8 Years Time.

I found it easy to write the story.
I found it hard To Plan The Story.



Nici’s world


UGH LEAVE ME ALONE!!!


It was a bright moon on a lovely night. When…


One Day There was a Sweet and super kind girl named Nici.  She Had Short dark blonde hair.
Her fingernails are painted Gold and her Toenails were painted purple. She Had Bright green eyes and
 really nice tan, and she loves to sing.


But her biggest problem she has is her Aunty and her Uncle keeps yelling at her and she has to
stay in her room or even do all the chores. She is not aloud to go outside of the house inlest she is
under parent supervision.


Right now she is 18 and all her teenager life she was suck in her room because she is always getting
told of for no reason. She hated her Aunty and her Uncle, and because of them she didn’t like her
teenage years. She also has to make to look after her two 13 year old brothers.

Her Aunty and her Uncle had ruined her life, she wanted to stop it…

The Next Day She Went up to her Mum and Dad and said “ I need to talk to you”
They Both replied “Okay Nici Where do you want to go to talk?
“ Umm in my room.” Replied Nici
“Okay Let’s go then.” They both replied toughther.


They walked up to the room and they started to talk. Nici said “ Mum And Dad we need to get
Aunty And Uncle there own apartment Because you know I am a well behaving kid and you kept
telling me off when they lie to you.” Said Nici “Please believe me” cried Nici
“Okay we believe you we will help you get them their own home.”


Then the next day her life was back to normal because they got a home for her Aunty and Uncle.
By Nici



          

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