This week we moved to the new South Hornby School We are now called Te Manu Tukutuku. So we had to make a poem about what we like about the school we are now at My Poem has what I feel, what I hear, What I see, What I smell and what I could touch.
My First day at Te Manu Tukutuku
I feel curious as I walk through the brand new school grounds.
I hear a lot of kids laughing and meeting up with their friends.
I see brand new shiny tables and new blue chairs.
I smell the brand new smell of furniture and the paint colours on our walls.
I touch the nice soft walls as I walk along the spaces.
I am excited for my future at this school.
Awesome writing Nici keep it up
ReplyDeleteHi Nici, I'm Joei from Awahono School, The poem is awesome! Maybe in your poem you could make it rhyme a bit. This reminds me of a poem called I am...
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